Once Upon A Time...

Hi :) I'm Holly, I'm a Creative Writing student from Sheffield and I've been advised to get my writing out on the internet in some way, so that's what I'm going to use this blog for.
I'm a work in progress so don't judge me too harshly, but of course I welcome any comments or criticisms!
Enjoy :D

My personal blog: www.theworsthangoverever.tumblr.com

Jan 11

The Soldier

I lit a Lucky Strike nervously,
as we approached the shore.
A wave of sickness swept over me,
I was terrified to the core.

My sergeant, Eugene Anderson,
a well respected soldier,
feared what was about to be done,
as he called his men to order.
 
I crept up the South-eastern beach,
My Thompson tight in hand,
The Japanese not yet in reach,
Silence from the island.

My comrades left and right of me,
Barely eighteen years old.
Too young to die “for their country”.
Too young to be so bold.

Artillery hidden in the hill,
let free an almighty roar.
I saw men, sliced by shrapnel,
fall bleeding to the floor.

Up ahead I saw an old friend,
Private Scotty Walker.
Swore he’d make it to the end,
For his girl in Florida.

The most valiant of marines,
Strike the Japanese cover.
To protect us men, still unseen,
They die with each other. 

Private Walker is among them,
5 ft 6 inches small.
But when that bullet hit him,
He never looked so tall.

I should have stayed covered to fight,
and yet I ran to his side,
putting myself in plain sight,
of Japanese fury and pride.

I died lying beside my buddy
- a true hero of war,
wishing I was in the country,
that we were fighting for. 

A ballad I had to write for a uni assignment. I like it but they rhyme and metre make it far too cheesy. But hey, I had no choice.


Jan 5

Awh, just discovered this cheesy little one I wrote like a year ago. Its no masterpiece but it sure is cute :’)

Too tall to be called elegant,
And on the scrawny side of slender.
But if she should criticise herself,
I would be the first to defend her.

Her eyes an ugly, murky green,
Her hair too flat and fine.
Still, to me, the picture of beauty,
Flawed, imperfect, divine.


Jan 3

The story I’ve been working my ass of for all day.

And still isn’t particularly brilliant.

But it’ll do, please tell me what you think :) It’s not long.

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Naked

Send home the guard who acts as your shield, and
knock down the strong stone wall you’ve built around you.
Cross the line you drew with your own hand,
unlock the door so that I can walk through.

Put down the sword that keeps people at bay,
and clear away your thick surrounding mist.
Come out the darkness where you hide away,
and fill the large divide where you feel safest.

It’s time for you to close the wide valley.
It’s time to rip down the highest fences.
Come on and take off your personality,
be brave and break down all of your defences.

Although you may feel naked, clear your head.
Allow me in and I’ll shield you instead.

(This isn’t finished, unfortunately. I’m posting this version because I like it best, however to make it a proper sonnet I need to change it. Booo.)


Jan 2

His Room.

Embrace me in a smog of cigarette smoke,
And the stench of last night’s stale beer.
Let me peer at the postcards, posters and pictures,
And peruse the shelves of Stephen King and Tolkien.

Surround me with the dire décor - 
The red velvet curtains faded from age,
The foul, floral, fag burnt carpet,
And the artex, straight out the seventies.

Let me run my fingers over the strings
Of four guitars, worn from years of passionate playing.
I’ll curl up on the stoner throne
And watch the dusty, grey TV.

Please take me to my utopia,
The room at the end of the corridor,
With the ironic No Smoking sign on the door,
On the top floor, of 15 Ivanhoe Avenue.


Right,

I made this months ago but now some of my work is coming to it’s final drafts I’m going to finally start using it.

Enjoy :)